Narrative idea

The narrative of my programme will revolve around a detective inspector investigating the attempted murder of a black teenager in a rural community. The detective is helped by the her partner as they try to solve the case whilst the teenager lies in an induced coma in the hospital. Eventually, the teenager wakes up but has little recollection of the event and therefore, with the help of the two detectives, tries to retrace his steps in order to remember what happened and to find who tried to kill him.

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